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A kiss to remember.....

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ne day in Canterlot.... Spike, now older, takes Rarity on the best date of their lives..... From sightseeing and shopping, to a romantic dinner and exchange of gifts, they make their way to a high balcony...
Rarity: Today was absolutely fabulous my precious Spikey-Wikey. :D

Spike: I'm glad it was everything you hoped for. :love: Um.... Rarity... I have to ask..

Rarity: Go ahead sweetie. Ask me anything.

Spike: After all the years I've chased you.... After the all the years of being rejected by you..... What made you make your decision?.. I mean I know I was persistent.... But I wanted to prove to you that my feelings for you were beyond that of a crush..... Even when I moved on..... You were the only mare my heart ever beat for..... I just want to know.... What made you choose?...

Rarity:...... I made myself choose.....  Back then... when you were finally of age..... My feelings for you were mixed..... I've watched you grow from being an adorable little dragon....to a mature and handsome young dragon.... I always thought we should just remain friends because of how things were between us. I thought that we could never have a proper, long-lasting relationship..... But I was wrong.... As my feelings for you grew ever so strong. All this time..... I realized that my special somepony..... my number one.... is my precious Spikey-Wikey..... *tears roll down Rarity's eyes as she smiles as well*

Spike:..... Rarity...... *spike wipes away her tears and holds her close with comfort and warmth*

Rarity surprises Spike with an intimate and passionate kiss, in which he kisses back the same way. Both hug and hold each other close.

Spike:.... My first kiss.. :)…...

Rarity: You and me both. :D

Spike has a surprised, but happy look on his face, causing Rarity to laugh. Both hold each other and continue to watch the great view of Canterlot.

My storywritting is so MEH!!!!
Spike and Rarity belong to Hasbro.


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:iconprincesscelestiaplz::iconthinksplz: "....I'm so proud of you, son.  You may have made your dream come true, as well as hers.  Don't worry, neither Luna nor I will interrupt or othewise disrupt your date.  And to be honest,  I always had a feeling that Rarity would eventually come around.  She doesn't even see you as the prince you are, yet she loves you for you, and she finally realized that herself.   It takes a tear to my eye."

****notice she's thinking this as she has seen this from a window and happen to see Spike and Rarity's kiss,  I can see how those could be her thoughts, and obviously she wants to leave her adoptive son alone********